glitcher on DeviantArthttps://www.deviantart.com/glitcher/art/Canned-Idea-1-9124834glitcher

Deviation Actions

glitcher's avatar

Canned Idea 1

By
Published:
3.5K Views

Description

This is a concept that was abandonned halfway through writing A Maverick's Tale. Just as every animaloid had a signature weapon, Mach Cheetah could fire a large yoyo on a wire from the vents on his arms that could effectively be used as a concussion projectile or a grappling hook to help him bank at high speeds. I used a yoyo instead of a more conventional tool because I thought it illustrated Mach's playful personality better.

It seemed like a good idea at the time, but as the script progressed, I discovered to my surprise that there were practically no justifiable situations to put it to good use. Nil. Nada. Zilch. Zip. Nothing. Nowt. Not a sausage. Any situation where Mach would require such a weapon could easily be replaced by a suitable object nearby. So the idea became redundant, and in the end it was dropped entirely. I may still change my mind if you clap really hard and cheer "I believe in you, Glitcher!", but otherwise this is one innovation you won't be seeing. Darn shame that. Do you think it was a good idea in the first place? Be honest.
Image size
711x426px 164.89 KB
© 2004 - 2024 glitcher
Comments20
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Genisay's avatar
I actually kind of like the idea, though this is coming really late now, as you stopped working on A Maverick's Tale.
There are often situations like this, where the writer could have a character use something else for the sake of practicality, but they don't, because it's more fun and entertaining to go with the object that isn't ordinary. Why use an every day object to get the task done when you can bust out your yoyo of awesome and do it in style?
Plus, to me, that kind of fit the personality I'd been seeing from Mach. He liked to show boat.